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doyledude
Scooby
United Kingdom
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 Posted - 20/07/2006 : 14:01:43
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Lloyds Vengeance - A New Breed Of hero
*** Staind - Can’t believe plays while an unknown, young male fights off several vampires. While they fight, he has several flashbacks in which he watches his mother get drained by a vampire (He is about 3). Once the fight is finished and they are killed, he walks off through the graveyard, to his mother’s grave. It reads “Tina Robson – 1959-1996”***
Unknown male – I love you mom, and im gonna do you proud…just like you did the world.
******** Lloyd’s Vengeance theme tune plays and opening credits roll ********
***Unknown male is sitting at a table with a young boy and old man***
Young Boy – Lloyd, pass the orange juice.
Unknown Male (Lloyd) – Sure thing Zach
***He slides it across the table to him***
Young Boy (Zach) – Thanks bro.
Old Man – So Lloyd,what with the new school year…are you gonna be okay?
Lloyd – Yeah grandpa, I’ll be fine. Why wouldn’t I be?
Old man (Grandpa) – It’s just, your attendance last year was scary, you missed more days than you attended.
Lloyd – Well there’s a perfectly logical explanation for that.
Grandpa – And that is…
Lloyd – None of your business.
Grandpa – Okay, if you don’t want to talk about it, it’s fine. Do you want a lift to school?
Lloyd – No thanks grandpa, that’s fine…I gotta swing by somewhere on my way to school.
Grandpa – Okay, don’t get up to any mischief
Lloyd – Me. Mischief…you have to be joking. Later.
*** Lloyd gets up from the table, picks up his bag and leaves for school. As door slams it cuts to a classroom filled with teenagers…one chair is empty. The teacher is doing the register***
Mrs. Johnson (Teacher) – Kelvin?
Kelvin – Present
Mrs. Johnson – Beth?
Beth – Here
Mrs. Johnson – Tony?
Tony – Here
Mrs. Johnson – Lloyd? (No answer)
*** Teacher looks up from her register at the empty chair ***
Mrs. Johnson – Lloyd Bencer? (No answer) Well, that’s not a good way to start of my classes.
*** The bell rings ***
Mrs. Johnson – Class dismissed
*** Everyone gets up and leaves. Cut to the Harristown graveyard, where Lloyd is kneeling down by his mothers grave, gathering dirt and putting it into a black pouch. He then zips it up, looks at the grave one more time, and leaves. As he walks off, an unknown man in a black cloak is hiding in bushes, watching Lloyd suspiciously. Cut back to Mrs. Johnson, sitting down with a phone in hand. She dials a number. It cuts to Grandpa sitting at home watching tv, when the phone rings. He picks it up (the screen is split).***
Grandpa – Hello?
Mrs. Johnson – Hello, this must be Mr Bencer…Lloyds grandpa
Grandpa – Oh god, what’s he done now?
Mrs. Lloyd – He didn’t turn up for school today.
Grandpa – Oh no, not this again.
Mrs. Johnson – Again? You mean this happens often?
Grandpa – No, um, carry on.
Mrs. Johnson – Well theres not much else to say realy, just if you could maybe drive him to school so you know he’s there…
Grandpa – Yes, I will.
Mrs. Johnson – Good, I hope this is the only time I have t speak to you on this matter.
Grandpa – Sure thing.
Mrs. Johnson – Goodbye.
*** Grandpa hangs up immedaitly as he hears the door slam. Lloyd walks in as if he had done nothing.***
Lloyd – Hey Grandpa
*** He drops his bag and begins to run up the stairs ***
Grandpa – Hello Lloyd….how was school?
Lloyd – Oh,um,it was okay I guess
Grandpa – What lessons did you have?
Lloyd – Well, um…Social…studies and other…stuff
Grandpa – Stuff?
Lloyd – Ya know…stuff.
Grandpa – That’s weird because I just got off the phone with Mrs. Johnson…
*** Worried look on Lloyds face ***
Grandpa - …And she says that you weren’t in today…isn’t that weird Lloyd?
Lloyd – Oh yeah, very weird. I was late and I didn’t sign in so she didn’t see …
Grandpa – Oh just drop the act Lloyd. You skipped a whole day of school.
Lloyd – So? Grandpa, It’s just one day, nothing major.
Grandpa – Nothing major? You were saying that last year, but that escalated into you being kiked out of 4 schools, getting low grades, me in jail and fined $2000. I tell you Lloyd, you better be in school tomorrow or else.
Lloyd – Okay,okay…I’ll be in school
Grandpa – yes you will, because im taking you.
Lloyd – No, that’s okay grandpa, it’s fine I’ll walk.
Grandpa – Lloyd, I trusted you to walk to school today, and we both know how that turned out.
Lloyd – Look, im sorry. I’ll be in school tomorrow I promise.
Grandpa – My decision is final Lloyd, im taking you to school.
Lloyd – But…
Grandpa – END OF.
Lloyd – Look I’ve said sorry, what more do you want? The $2000 back?
Grandpa – Well now that you mention it we are very low on cash.
Lloyd – We’ll cope grandpa. We have been coping for 11 years.
Grandpa – So what are you going to do job-wise then? Ever thought of that? What is your future? You have terrible grades, and you skipping school isn’t helping. We’re on income support for god’s sake.
Lloyd – Look, I’ve gt a lot on my plate right now okay.
Grandpa – Like what?
Lloyd – The anniversary of moms death that’s what.
Grandpa – Look, that was a long time ago. You didn’t make such a fuss about the last 10 years, what’s so special about this one?
Lloyd – Look, I don’t know okay. It just feels…diferant.
Grandpa – So where were you today anyway?
Lloyd – I was visiting mom?
Grandpa – What? Her bodies in L.A, how could you have visited her? It’s like 4 hours away.
Lloyd – Well it doesn’t matter how I got there exactly.
***7 hours ago…Lloyd is in his back garden chanting unknown latin. He then scatters an unknown substance on the floor and shouts “TELIPORT!” He is gone instantly. Cut back to present day with Lloyd and grandpa***
Grandpa – Okay, I’ll let you off once….but if I hear one more thing from the school about you skipping classes…
Lloyd – Okay,okay grandpa. You won’t, okay. It was just a one off, tomorrow, im gonna walk to school and work hard all day.
Grandpa – that’s want I like to hear!
Lloyd – I know.
*** Camera shows Zach listening to the conversation. Lloyd walks out of the kitchen towards Zach. ***
Lloyd – Hey Zach.
*** Zach says nothing ***
Lloyd – Zach?
*** Still silent ***
Lloyd – Zach, are you okay?
Zach – Lloyd?
Lloyd – Yeah?
Zach – Where’s mommy?
*** Lloyd looks stunned ***
Lloyd – Mommy’s on holiday Zach, remember?
Zach – For the last 5 years?
Lloyd – Yeah bro, it’s a big long holiday.
Zach – When will she be back?
Lloyd – Soon, bro, Soon. Okay?
Zach – Yeah. Thanks Lloyd.
Lloyd – That’s okay little man.
*** Zach walks off, leaving Lloyd with a concerned look on his face. He then picks up his school bag and walks upstairs He opens his bedroom door, leading to a plain room. White walls, curtains, bed, and 3 big drawers. He puts his bag on his bed and unzips it. He pulls out the bag of dirt and places it on his bed. He then pulls out 4 black candles. He then gets up off of his bed and picks up a drinking glass (empty), and places it on the bed. He then fills it with water. He then pulls out a draw from under his bed and places it all in there. He then closes the draw. He turns around and finds his grandpa there. He jumps!***
Grandpa – What are you doing Lloyd?
Lloyd – Oh, um, nothing, just…tidying my room.
Grandpa – Oh…whats with all the candles?
Lloyd – Uh…yeah…im…saving the environment by using the minimum of electricity.
Grandpa – Oh, well good for you. Just be careful with fire.
Lloyd – Sure thing grandpa.
*** Grandpa walks out and shuts the door behind him. Lloyd immediately opens his bedroom window. He tips the remaining things out of his bag, tosses it out the window, and then jumps out and onto the grass. He then approaches a random man walking down he street ***
Lloyd – Hey, wheres the Harristown church?
Pedestrian – It’s just down this road (point down the road) and on the left, you can’t realy miss it.
Lloyd – Thanks a lot.
*** Lloyd then runs down the street and looks left. He sees the church and walks down towards it. Back to home. Grandpa is knocking on Lloyds door. ***
Grandpa – Lloyd? Lloyd? (Continues knocking) Im coming in.
*** He opns the doot, to find the curtains flowing and the window open. He pulls out his cell phone to tr and ing him. Lloyds phone is on the bed, so it starts ringing. Grandpa then kneels down and opens Lloyd bed drawers. He pulls out the bag of dirt, then a digging trowel and then another small bag. He opens it. He immediately reacts to a foul smell coming from the unknown substance. He does it back up immediately and puts everything back. Cut back to Lloyd, trying to open the church door. After several attempts, he gets tired, and delivers a kick that knocks the door straight down! ***
Lloyd – That always does the trick.
*** He opens his bag and pulls out a torch. He shines it around whilst walking. The torch shows a big candle on a tray. Lloyd picks up the candle, and tears off some of the melted wax from underneath the candle. He puts it in his bag and starts to walk out. As he is walking out, a rock comes flying through the window. He picks it up and shines the torch at it. The is a note. “I have been expecting you, Lloyd. Next time, you die . PUZUZU ” He puts the note and the rock in his bag too. He then looks around, and runs out of the old church. The next morning. Lloyd is making breakfast downstairs. He sits down to eat his toast. As he takes a few bites into it, his grandpa comes down the stairs. ***
Lloyd – Morning G.
Grandpa – (In a sarcasticly happy tone) Oh Good morning Lloyd. Have a good nights sleep?
Lloyd – Sure thing, Im ready to go to school and get some work done.
Grandpa – Oh realy. Have you read the paper yet?
Lloyd – No, why?
Grandpa – Well, because the local church burnt down last night.
Lloyd – So?
Grandpa – Thing is, you were caught on cctv, last night in the church.
Lloyd – Once again…So?
Grandpa – Don’t give me that crap, you burnt down the church last night didn’t you Lloyd?
Lloyd – No, why the hell would I burn down a church?
Grandpa – Why do you do most things you do, Lloyd?
Lloyd – Because I have a duty, and to fulfil that duty I have to break a few rules, make some choices that may anger people, but burning down a church is not one of those duties. Ya understand Grandpa?
Grandpa – No I don’t understand Lloyd, I realy do not.
Lloyd – Well I’m going to school.
Grandpa – I know your not.
*** Grandpa then picks up a vase and smashes it against a wall. Cut to Lloyd walking up steps into a very busy and seemingly happy school. He continues walking through the school, to the reception door. Cut to 1 unknown boy who has another boy by the throat in a corner ***
Bully – Now, you give me every cent you have and I don’t pound the **** out of you, got that? Now hand it over.
Tony – Let go of me!
*** The bully punches the boy in the gut and grips his throat harder. Lloyd approaches the bully ***
Lloyd – Is there a problem here?
Bully- Piss off pal.
Lloyd – Wrong answer.
*** Lloyd pushes the bully off of the boy. The bull (james) tries to land a punch but Lloyd ducks it, and floors him with a karate kick to the gut! Lloyd then turns to the boy (tony) ***
Lloyd – Are you okay?
Tony – Yeah, im fine. Thanks for that.
Lloyd – Don’t worry, someone had to put that dick in his place right?
Tony – I hear ya. Say, where did you learn to kick like that?
Lloyd – I didn’t learn…I in-herited.
Tony – Oh.
*** An pretty girl with glasses, and straight brown hair approaches Tony ***
Girl – Tony, are you okay? What happened?
Tony – Nothing Beth, don’t worry. Just a bit of trouble with James.
Beth – Well where is he?
*** Tony points to the floor ***
Beth – You knocked out James, Tony?
Tony – No, this guy did…say what’s your name?
Lloyd – Lloyd Bencer
Tony – Wait, you weren’t at school yesterday were you?
Lloyd – No. Why?
Tony – the teacher mentioned something about it.
Lloyd – Were in the same class?
Beth – Yep.
*** The bell rings ***
Tony – Speaking of which, it’s time for lessons. Wanna walk with us Lloyd?
Lloyd – Sure.
*** As the 3 walk off, an unknown man lurks in the bushes watching Lloyd ***
Man – Son.
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Lloyds Vengeance - A New Breed Of hero
